My four evaluation questions are exporting and uploading as I type this!
The way I have presented them is a recorded PowerPoint presentation, involving narration in which I talk about my decisions and points mentioned in the answers. After I received some last minute feedback, I changed some of the article and rearranged it a bit into a simpler format for reading!
I noticed a few errors made it into the last cut of the film, so here is a fixed version! I thought I would act on some feedback I was given, and try adding in more images. However I feel like the page is too cluttered now, and I prefer the original.
Feel free to leave your opinion in the comments! The second draft! I'm really proud of this work, as I think it looks really professional and a looks like good product.
I added the article this time, and rearranged some of the things on the page. However, I think some changes I would like to make would be add some more images, including images of Malcolm and perhaps some 'behind the scenes images' too. What do you think? |
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